If this piece was supposed to have humor, I missed something. It's a damn Pixar movie. Dramatic Structure 101 - conflict between the protagonist and the antagonist unravels, with the protagonist winning or losing against the antagonist. The falling action typically containing a moment of final suspense, in which the final outcome of the conflict is in doubt. Sadly your article's analysis is skewed. How about writing us something entertaining. A high brow piece about, say how hipsters have aggressive emotional unavailability and that their lifestyle reveals a subtle sadness suffused by their ironically poor taste in clothing.
Hey thoughtful article but you sure dug deep to get this out of it.. My daughter didnt excel at soccer. She loved to play but she realized it wasnt for her and so she stopped but she stopped at peace with the decision and moved on to something she could be better at. I kind of disagree with your premise.. Sometimes you have to know what your good at and when to hand in the towel at something your not,
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